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Keyword :		Category :	All Children's Drama Fiction Non Fiction Poetry Young Adult

Shirty Girtie

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what sort of mischief?
and you said you'd drawn pictures, can we see some?

very engaging pitch
good luck
love
Jo

thank you for your comment. shirtie girtie is different to other girls mainly because of her outrageous attitude and plain rudeness that shows through at the begginning of the book. but then you see her change slightly and realise that she doesnt have to behave so badly, which i think sets a good example to the young girls that i feel are the audience. but this message is combined with humourous lines and drawings and characters that everyone can relate to, making it a must have on your daughters bookshelf.

Congratulations on finishing your book and on the initiative of uploading your pitch, but ... there's a lot of books out there about naughty girls who get into trouble. Why should I want to read yours rather than those? What makes it different? If your pitch could tell me that, it might have more impact. Sorry, I don't mean to be negative, I hope you'll take this as the constructive criticism it's meant to be.
Roger

Awesome - you've written a book already! Good luck.

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