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You gave great detail about who your intended market would be, and your presentation was fitting for the style of book that you are pitching, but I think I'd need a few more details to get me to pick the book up off the imaginary shelf, I know from watching your pitch once that seeds are sown in the past, and things happen in the future, but I'm struggling to remember anything else. Have you got a tag line, a dramatic sort of "what would you do if.... - someone was out to get you, if...you found your granny dead in the bath! that kind of thing?
I hope you find an agent.
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Jo

I must confess that most thrillers leave me absolutely cold, so I'm not sure I'm qualified to judge, but certainly your delivery is excellent, as is your confidence with the material, which is as important in writing as it is in pitching. Good luck with it.

You came across very well. Good luck in getting published - at least you won't need media training.

This is perfect Transworld fodder , somebody tell them they need to sign this guy .

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